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Relationships Chart
A bit confusing, but this is how the relationships are supposed to be. Maybe it will change while I'm writing, as I'm still thinking what am I supposed to do with Maya, Behati and Yuno. They are necessary, but I don't know their role in the big picture š„²
(I know itās weird having a dog tagged as Lovers, but it's because I can't find somebody that looks like HiĆ©lo, I swear it's not zoophilia ā ļøā ļø)
I need more Ethan and Maya, tell me about them please š„ŗ
Iām glad you liked them šš tbh, Maya was a total extra character that wouldnāt appear for a long, LONG time, but I decided sheās gonna accompany Ethan cuz sheās too cool to just disappearš¤š½ (and now Iām dying to rethink the whole story omg send help)
Hmmm I dunno what to say about Ethan without spoiling but, geez, heās hard to write. His description is apparently simple: shy, insecure guy who wants to be loved. Simple. SO SIMPLE THAT IS HARD TO MAKE HIM LOOK LIKE A PROTAGONIST. He was made to be a normal guy amidst the weirdos, but because of this, itās troublesome to highlight his own characteristics. Like, everything is related to somebody else, the drama is because of someone else⦠he doesnāt have any āactiveā decisions, and itās annoying me šš
I hope he gets to improve and realize he is not a spectator of his own life. He needs to act by himself, to do what he wants, and stop living for others. MOVE, BOY!
(Secretly this is an advice for myself lol)
Thank you very much for the ask š«¶š½
I FINALLY POSTED THE FIRST CHAPTER WOOHOO
Wish me luck to write the second chapter šš½šš½
Please, read it, please, read it, please, read it::::
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63364711/chapters/162337525
Abinji
āDateā. Ooh la la, love is in the air š they even match clothes, what a married couple full of love and trust ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Sylris always asks Kenyan to go out with him. When she accepts, heās the one who prepares the moment; the place, time, food, music, activities⦠heās super detailed with it.
Kenyan is grateful that at least he has some sense and wonāt take her somewhere uncomfortable, but, ugh, itās a bother to get dressed up just to go out with him. She needs to keep remembering the maids that itās just a date, not a Royal party.
(THEY ARE SO BEAUTIFUL. LOOK AT HER HAIR. LOOK AT HIS ARMS.)
More old designs!!!!
Kenyan was LlyĆsma (how is it pronounced???), and the stereotypical Elfin Princess. Ask my younger me why the wings, cuz Iām unable to tell š I donāt remember much of her previous story, but I know she was in love with her guard. She also participated in a rebellion (second drawing), but it doesnāt even make sense; Kenyan, wearing an armor and fighting straight on? I doubt it.
Thatās Nalyke, currently HiĆ©lo. I changed the name to Aliza cuz I was confusing it with Kenyanās name, but some things happened at home and I considered safer to make Aliza a male, so now itās HiĆ©lo. The personality and lore itself didnāt change a lot, only the gender.
Ah, there was HiĆ©loās siblings too, but now I donāt know if I should keep it or no. Maya (I mentioned her once) was his sister, but itās not anymore. Thereās also Izak, but I donāt know if I should even keep him as a character anymore.
Thatās Izak, previously a guard and Sylrisās left hand. Now, IF he appears in my story, heāll be a priest.
And thatās Yuno! Somehow, HE NEVER CHANGED! His name was always Yuno and his first appearance stays (except the eyes). But his personality is a question mark even now. I donāt know if heād be more playful, serious, or shy, so Iāll just write his reactions and see how he acts through the book.
Nixies
Nixies are like fairies. Theyāre born from flowers that survive Shizoresā rain/acid, not having any sexual or romantic relationships, only friendships. They also donāt have gender, having androgynous appearance.
They canāt talk (verbally), so they use gestures and touches to communicate. For this reason, they stay in groups to facilitate their interactions. A minority of them know how to write in Martrakoji, but theyāre clumsy with it because theyāre tiny, making it quite hard to talk to another species.
They donāt eat, but need to drink loads of water. They also donāt live for too long in a single life (when they die, they go back to dirt and may reincarnate in the future with some memories).
Their function is to protect plants and attack anyone who dares to destroy them. They clean the air, too, making it easier to breathe by breaking down heavier gases and increasing the oxygen saturation. Some of them have the capacity to restaure dead plants, or release a pollen that enhance airflow and heals living beings who passes there.
Itās always amazing to walk in their region, you can feel your lungs getting happy at breathing their air. You just need to be careful to donāt hurt any of them or the plants. They will chase you down with poison, diseases or block your oxygen until you die. š
HiƩlo Garoh
Yes, I made him furry. He has a bestial form too, but I don't want to draw it (lazyyyy), so you can imagine a green wolf.
I know I posted a drawing of him before, but it was annoying me that he was technically a lot-haired man with a dog nose, tail, and ears on top of his head.
And I was watching YouTube (thatās why they say you should be careful with what you watch), and I saw a video of a person making furries commissions. And it was cute and cool at the same time, perfect for HiĆ©lo.
It was my first time drawing furry, so I struggled a bit with the face shape, but I guess I got it the way I wanted. The shoes are a bit odd because I was lazy and didnāt look for references. And can you see how SMOOTH his fur is? Like, I understand Kenyan now. He's like a walking blanket for her.
Shizore
The fluffy cloud-bees š They float in groups so nobody gets their body dispersed in the air! Also, their colors ain't defined like in this drawing (yellow and black strips); it's more like a mess of tones of yellow and some black spots. Consider it an Ethanās drawing simplifying what he saw.
In Summer, Divulon(similar to the Sun) shines for longer times, warming them a lot, and causing them to rain toxin/acid. If this rain falls into rivers/lakes, the citizens need to purify it before using it (I guess I will explain it later). If nobody tries to purify it, until Winter this water will turn into other shizores (consequently purifying the water too).
Nixies need shizores. As they are born from flowers, they need shizoresā rain to fertilize a special kind of flower that doesn't die from the acid. After getting rained over, these flowers will bloom more Nixies in Spring.
For this reason, Nixies have the job of taking care of shizores, keeping them over the right flowers so they won't kill other plants.
Martrakoji
BEHOLD! MARTRAāS ALPHABET. Geez, it is so hard to find the sounds in English š if you speak some Latino language it is easier to understand!
B, D, F, G, H, J, K, L, M, N, P, R, S, T, V, W, X, Y, Z, SH
W sounds like a vowel (u), but it canāt be matched with another consonant (like vowels do), and for this reason itās a consonant.
The vowels are A E I O U. Like in Portuguese, they have accents depending on the word.
For example, BravĆ”(place). Without acute accent (loud and strong), the stressed syllable would be BRA (BRA-va), but the accent turns VĆ into the stressed one (bra-VĆ).
Same with circumflex accent(low and deep?). LĆ¢nu(plural of it), LĆ-nu, without accent would be la-NU. The difference is small, but it exists. Try ācalling/screamingā the word with emphasis in the stressed syllable. Like, LAAAAAAnu. LaNUUUUUU. U get it?
bra-VĆ, not BRA-va.
LĆ-nu, not la-NU.
u-TĆ(nine), not U-te.
Ć-nu(they/male), not e-NU.
Ć-nan(we), not i-NAN.
Ć isnāt used.
Ć isnāt used.
o-ye-TĆ(desert), not o-YE-to.
mo-Ć-li(rude), not MOU-li.
Ć isnāt used.
I tried to understand my own logic, but I canāt explain it šš
I just know that having M and N in the end makes the syllable stressed.
o-VEN(soon,early)
wa-NAM(double)
Also, sometimes Y makes the syllable stressed.
zi-YE (musician). Short word, stressed.
sha-yu-DE-fe (sea port). Long word, non-stressed.
yo-RAN (resignation). N/M syllables are stronger than Y.
Sohiel
The Goddess' family composed by Maivtre, Odabrani, and Iskatram.
Sohiel [soɦiĖew] = I'm the Fire Goddess' Family
|| Soy [soj] = I am (Spanish), family (ĻĻι, Greek), ancestry (Turkish)
|| Hi [ri] = Fire (Japanese)
|| El [ew] = God (Hebrew)
MaĆ®ve + vatre [mŹivʲtrÉ] = Master/Mother of Fire (French, Greek)
Odabrani [odÉbrŹni] = The Chosen One (Croatian)
Iskatram [iskatɾam] = Forged by Fire (Iskovano vatrom, Croatian)
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⢠Maivître's Blood protects us;
⢠Fire shall not hurt us;
⢠Earth shall not hurt us;
⢠Water shall not hurt us;
⢠Wind shall not hurt us;
⢠All diseases shall not prevail;
⢠All wounds shall not prevail;
⢠Our souls are forged by fire;
⢠Maivtre can have only one child;
⢠Maivtre's child must be female;
⢠Iskatram must be engaged before turning into Maivtre;
⢠Maivtre can help to decide an Odabrani to Iskatram, but only Iskatram can choose it definetely.
⢠Odabrani is considered Maivtreās Voice.
⢠Odabrani's existence is totally dependent on Maivtre. Otherwise, he's useless and discarded.
ponias look is for the story next project is a group photo of all my good characters
character sheet
more about the backstory coming soon