Character Description - Blog Posts

The Exorcist and The Werewolf

Wolf’s name is still a working progress, but other than that it’s good.

Kirishi ✨🌿

He's a short king 👑

new character sheet of kirishi, probably gonna draw him again soon :)

Kirishi

my new oc

with the sketch

hes a mentor figure to iraka by teaching him how to use plant energy and how to grow with in and so on. hes goods friends with yumeno and just a very nice chill guy. he has a very messy room full of plants books and fairy lights everywher. So he is a very cozy person 😊🍄🍁🌿🌻🌧️🌟🌳🌼

man took to long i was awake till 6am

new pfp and logo

ponias look is for the story next project is a group photo of all my good characters

Just wrote a little character blurb for the two of them <3. The format is inspired by @goopycloudeyes Please go check them out, their art is absolutely amazing! If you're a fan of Frankenstein AU's you'll love their art!

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Adam Frankenstein

(a.k.a. The Creature)

2.5 (?) - he/him - 8"0 - Pisces

After burning down the DeLacey's family cottage, the creature saves the life of a woman after she nearly drowns in a river rapid, but he's shot by her male companion and fleas further into the woods. Injured and alone he resolves to find his creator to demand justice, but his plans change when the woman he saved returns to thank him. Now he finds himself in unfamiliar territory with someone who isn't afraid of his appearance and wants to be his friend.

Evelyn Shaw

23 - she/her - 5"5 - Scorpio

Having grown up in a remote farming community, Evelyn only had her siblings and books for escape from the dullness of her day to day life. Possessing a passionate and independent soul, she never thought she'd meet someone who understood her. But that all changes when she falls into a river and is saved by a mysterious man with piercing yellow eyes. Knowing he's somewhere out there terribly injured she sets out to thank him for rescuing her.

by Lazette Gifford

Description of main characters in first draft stories often fall into two wide categories — far too little or way too much.  Writers see their characters and they want their readers to see them, too.  However, sometimes they can go too far in description, especially in the main character.

What?  Don’t you want the reader to see the main character just as he or she is?  Yes, you do.  However, you need to consider two things about readers.  First, they have vivid imaginations and can ‘see’ characters without every detail drawn in.  Second — and the more important of the two — the reader wants to connect with the main character in some way.  This may mean that she wants to see the character as herself or she may want to imagine the character as a favorite star.  If you give too much description, you erase that connection.

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